PoL Soaps--Who Shall be the Victim?

yes,Zak is gonna be the dead one
no complains,Zak...im starting this,remember?

and ud probably run out of the room when im done questioning u
and ull be either the witness or suspect

dunno which

Actually I started it...And you trying to take over everything is starting to piss me off.

BUT nobody cares what i think, so i'll just leave everything to you guys. (This also means you can't use me as a dead body)

*Sigh* Everything pisses you off, Zaky...

It's not really a CSI without a dead person, and it's not a soap if someone gets killed. So... If this is a soap, then one must only get injured. It's just not as good if they're actually killed. (Although in Desperate Housewives, one of the main girls married this dude who was said you have murdered his ex wife. I'm really disappointed in myself... Can't believe I watched that) So... Zak never said that we couldn't use him as an injured person...

I WANNA BE A WITNESS!

then im a witness to even though i wanted to be detective (so infair D:<)

you can do the bad cop good cop thing...

Nat you do realize that there's always a TEAM of detectives/investigators.

Wait, wait... So is this gonna be a CSI or a soap? I like CSI more myself.

its gonna be more like CSI

Or CSI with three times the drama.

u started the topic,Zak
i started the intro and i know most on how it will go down

speaking of which,how bout we make it half soap,half CSI

Zak gets brutaly injured and dies when the killer comes back to try to kill him again
(yes,Zak,ur still the body...quit being a baby and suck it up like a man...if u can)

and,as for the team of investigaters...
ever heard of Privite Eyes?

Detective White will have an assistant and nothing more

...yes,my detective name is White
cut me some slack,its the best i could do for a cop soap

anything to complain(Zak),add(Zak),or talk about(Zak) guys?

We still don't know who will be the witnesses and everything.

yea can i have an important part other than a witness???

I wanna be a witness so I can tell some of what happened er someting. And if there will be that many witnesses, then it should be at a party or some place crowded.

oooo then i call assistant

Why can't you die Nat? We could say that somebody tried to rape you outside of a night club and when you fought back they shot you in the head. Then when we find a suspect Lloyd comes out of nowhere and shoots him, then either turns the gun on himself or gets arrested.

Much better then some random person killing me.

rape? lol XD

Zak, delete that before Nat sees it. She will surely MURDER you. And not in the soaps.

Key word is TRIED

but its better then some random person killing me for no reason, they would have no motive and the investigators wouldn't know where to begin. In mine a fiber or something could be found on her body linking it to the suspect. They would also know that it was a male. Nat just wants me dead.

*tenses to jump Zak*
Mel,would u be upset if i kill ur brother?

I could say no, and to go ahead, but in my mind, I'd secretly be p-oed. But yea, that's exactly the reason that I didn't think a girl should be the dead one. Rape would come up. Rape no good. (Disturbing much, Zaky )

How about...

A man did something horrible that we don't know about one night, and was expecting a certain someone to come out to kill him. Zak was walking home one night, and the man thought that Zak was the one going to kill him. The man stabbed, or shot, either one, Zak, wounding him severely. The man then stole Zak's wallet and such, and that's how we get fingerprints. Then we go to the place Zak says that he was shot, or stabbed, and search around. We find evidence of the reason the man was on the lookout for someone to kill him. Then we have a big, dramatic chase and find the guy, who we later question, and then imprison.

Is that good at all?

Nat won't like it because i don't die...

You'd still get stabbed or shot! That should be enough... Okay, how 'bout... Zak gets beat up severely at some time? That's a lot like torture. It wouldn't be as fun if he died... And it would pretty much entirely be a CSI if he did.

the attempted killer has to be one of us
it cant be a random person

oh,and,BTW-

*slams Zak into construction site gravel,then wedges him into a windmill and rolls that windmill down a mountain*

thats payback for the rape talk
seriously,dude,dont u know me AT ALL?